An old anecdote from my diary.
When you were very near,
Never did I feel any fear
Loving you is my duty
for it made me very happy.
I wished you to be beside me
so I would see no one besides you
Solitude was very painful
though hard to be very cheerful;
Happiness came in a glimpse
and ordeals came in tons
When I was heartless
For life seemed mirthless;
Yonder I saw a smile
welcoming me into life
15 comments:
profound!
Solitude is something we all carry from birth to death.
*HUGZ*
Keshi.
B'fully written..
Nice blog btw...
Beautiful sonnet :) Loved it.
@keshi
@sachi
@dewdrop
Thanks a lot friends for dropping by:)))
mirage
Hi ,
I was reading ur blog posts and found some of them to be very good.. u write well.. Why don't you popularize it more.. ur posts on ur blog ‘Thought Snaps’ took my particular attention as some of them are interesting topics of mine too;
BTW I help out some ex-IIMA guys who with another batch mate run www.rambhai.com where you can post links to your most loved blog-posts. Rambhai was the chaiwala at IIMA and it is a site where users can themselves share links to blog posts etc and other can find and vote on them. The best make it to the homepage!
This way you can reach out to rambhai readers some of whom could become your ardent fans.. who knows.. :)
Cheers,
hmm nice drawing. is it by u ??
and also good lines. loved these line.
Nice one..
nice blog.. good post!
@ray
@nishanth nair
@kaunquest
Thanks guys for dropping by:)))
@deeps
Thanks deeps,ya it is my old drawing in my diary ....scribblings in solitude:)))
mirage
and where did u go? :)
Keshi.
solitude...
nice word, but bitter to experience. :)
well written dear.
hey..
nice poem..straight and simple..
"I wished you to be beside me
so I would see no one besides you"
gr8 line..
keep posting..
visit my blog too..
lv:nickku
Very profound! I think I have written a post on similar note of distances making one feel that how close they are :)
Good one
Cheers
Hey, you are tagged!
Nice quotes.
"Never take life seriously. Nobody gets out alive anyway."
Cheers,
Salil
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